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JuliaAguilar
05-12-2004, 08:49 AM
Any songwriters around? If you want, post some here. I write a little, but nothing has ever been sung out loud, mostly just ideas in my head.

Patton
05-12-2004, 10:35 AM
Yea, I wright. I've wrighten about 4 songs all the way, and I'm working on about 12 right now. i like to right older styles of songs. I also wright many different types of stuff.

jdust629
05-12-2004, 10:46 AM
Yea, I wright. I've wrighten about 4 songs all the way, and I'm working on about 12 right now. i like to right older styles of songs. I also wright many different types of stuff.
You spelled write two different ways and got it wrong both times.

NONE9999
05-12-2004, 01:32 PM
I have tons of pages of lyrics kept inside of a paper holder thing I have..As for songs, I have a couple finished ones but mostly when I write something I will think of something else and then it will create a chain of writing that I cant stop. Also, even if I think of the smallest thing, I will write it down, cut it out and put it in my lyric stack..I will eventually make more songs but until then its all fun :D

FatBastard
05-14-2004, 07:26 PM
hi.
havenīt been to the music forum before, so if this is considered whoring or whatever, let me know.

anyway, hereīs the song "youīve always been a friend". itīs actually written by me and my roomie... but i love it, and the story behind it.

you drink one for the moon, one for the night,
one for each star then you think it's alright.
you think it's all just a game, wait for the pain.
no motherfucker's gonna remember your name when you get
beat down, smacked up. you're everything society wants to throw out.
so why did you turn, why did you fall,
you can't let it go cause your back's once been burnt no..

so tell me your story. i wanna help not bury you.
yeah you've always been a friend.

well I came to this world like anybody else.
i rode my bike down the streets with my best friends.
i guess you can say, i had it all.
than came the day i will never forget when i got
beat down, smacked up. i fell like a stone and i broke like glass.
i lost everything i ever had, my life my soul.
now i'm just a wacko with no place to go

so tell me your story. i wanna help not bury you.
yeah you've always been a friend.

oh, if you wanna hear it, hereīs a link http://www.garageband.com/play/song?|pe1|S8LTM0LdsaSnZVO0Zm4

EDIT: to listen to it, you have to copy/paste it. but i recommend listening to it. of course...

at0mic88
05-14-2004, 07:53 PM
oh, if you wanna hear it, hereīs a link http://www.garageband.com/play/song?|pe1|S8LTM0LdsaSnZVO0Zm4

EDIT: to listen to it, you have to copy/paste it. but i recommend listening to it. of course...

Not a bad song... But hey im only 15 what do i know :p

Star
05-14-2004, 09:07 PM
I'm sorry. I am not a mean person but if you want to be a writer, then you should learn how to spell first. Sorry, just a thought.

A Fried Egg
05-14-2004, 10:13 PM
Here's a sample lyric to my soon to be hit song, "Faggots must die."


We can all do our part.
Kill the faggots. Kill the faggots.
We will stop them soon enough.
Kill the faggots. Kill the faggots.
They will be gone soon, yeah.
Kill them dead. Kill them dead.
We will purify the world, yeah.
Kill the faggots. Kill the faggots.

For a demo track, visit www.antifaggot.com

suckmykiss
07-04-2004, 03:33 AM
Here's a sample lyric to my soon to be hit song, "Faggots must die."


We can all do our part.
Kill the faggots. Kill the faggots.
We will stop them soon enough.
Kill the faggots. Kill the faggots.
They will be gone soon, yeah.
Kill them dead. Kill them dead.
We will purify the world, yeah.
Kill the faggots. Kill the faggots.

For a demo track, visit www.antifaggot.com

maybe your a stupid nazi freak and should go screw a bush-if it will let you

ipathrasta22
07-04-2004, 03:45 AM
Here's my lyrics:

Fried Eggs Fucking Suck
..dumb nazi

and no i'm not a faggot, your lyrics just suck

Sezril
07-04-2004, 05:23 AM
Here's a sample lyric to my soon to be hit song, "Faggots must die."


We can all do our part.
Kill the faggots. Kill the faggots.
We will stop them soon enough.
Kill the faggots. Kill the faggots.
They will be gone soon, yeah.
Kill them dead. Kill them dead.
We will purify the world, yeah.
Kill the faggots. Kill the faggots.

For a demo track, visit www.antifaggot.com
XD

How Seth Putnam-ish.

Anaesthesia
07-04-2004, 08:42 AM
I'm a writer but I don't like sharing my work, because you never know who's going to steal it and make money off it.

EatMYAte
07-04-2004, 04:04 PM
Yeah, I agree with anaesth, Id like to post my stuff, but thousands of people see this every day...and can just steal it. Basically, my poems/lyics seem like Kurt Cobain ripoffs, tons of oxymorons, things that dont make sense until you think about them for a day, and lots of symbolization..I feel guilty...but all my poems come straight from my heart so...And its totally truthful, and thats what i feel is important...truth. You know guys like Blink182 wont go "So i put a gun to his head and pull the metal hook!"...Oh the fuck well....Ill give you ONE of my shittier Songs.....


Lets just suffice one last time
If he uses us and we do good, were safe
Hell let us free, free spirits
Well be out of Captivity

No pain, No fear, No hardships
Everything is dull and black, yeah, black
Look for the dark light in hte light room....

EUTHANASIA!!!! <--chorus...over and over until desired completeness

Now that youre out and gone
You feel a troublesome power
Youve never debunked before
The sound in your eyes is sour

Euthanasia(in end) Mercy Killing (over and over)

Please dont take this stuff and use it....It really came from the heart....and things from the heart dont come back soothing.