My first Flash Animations

[ShuDawg]

Now, I have been using flash for only a week or two (9 days to be exact). I have made a few short animations. If you could post your input on how I could make em better and if you liked em at all. I am no where near as good as the people on eBaums world or ABS.

http://home.comcast.net/~shudawg/hitler1.swf
http://home.comcast.net/~shudawg/Hellotwo.swf
http://home.comcast.net/~shudawg/Spider-Man_Parody.swf

I hope u like em :)

[The Deadman]

Only thing i liked is the second one at the end when the time frame is wrong.It looks weird and funny.The 3rd one was ok but too slow :mad:

[TinaBina]

wow, why are you trying to be likes those guys that made the 'end of the world' flash? that's not cool, you can't really copy them. i guess they were pretty cool for your first time. better take some acting lessons to straighten up those voice-overs. ;) keep it up, though :)

[ShuDawg]

lol.... I was on Teamspeak with a few of my friend checkin stuff out on ebaums world, one guy said to check out the end of the world thing, then I asked for ideas, and ppl said destroy france. I put the two together. The end of the world thing can never be copied. It is the greatest flash I have ever seen. :) I am glad a friend told me bout this site.

oh and... I am still learning how to work flash. I think its an okay first, second and third one... for how little time Ive uised flash :\. But the voice over thing... yeah. I have no voice actors except a few friends, and I do it all over TS.