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Voe25
08-11-2004, 01:38 PM
hey i wrote this song, its kinda emo i guess but ya tell me what you think:


Imperfect



Feeling like you don’t want me around,
But I don’t need this anymore,
And I’ve been thrown to the ground,
But it’s not going to happen anymore,

{It’s over}

My imperfection is so obvious,
It has become so obvious, {obvious}
No matter what I do,
It’s imperfect to you, {imperfect to you}


You say you’re tired of me,
And that you don’t need this,
But I don’t want it really,
I’m tired of taking it out through my fist,

{It’s over}

My imperfection is so obvious,
It has become so obvious, {obvious}
No matter what I do,
It’s imperfect to you, {imperfect to you}


[Imperfect
I’m imperfect
So imperfect]

{Imperfect
I’m imperfect
So imperfect}

Your imperfection is so obvious,
It has become so obvious, {obvious}
No matter what you do,
It’s imperfect to them, {imperfect to them}



Normal text= clean singing {text in these things=screaming} [text in these=soft singing]

WhatTheFluck295
08-11-2004, 01:45 PM
You mention "imperfect" too much. The chorus/hook has no substance.

Voe25
08-12-2004, 07:46 PM
ok ya i see what you mean, ya i suck at writing lyrics. thanks

Rockafeller312
08-12-2004, 08:15 PM
what about mine...

Far Away From Here

I would find a better place to be
Somewhere that I can mind
My ways and I will see

I look and I hear and I make my way
To always survive throughout every single day...

I would look out my window
Something there is surprising me
I would look at the lights
I would see all the sights
I would think of that life
Far away from here

You would not listen to anything I'd say
Even when I would stop
I'd never be ok

I look and I hear and I make my way
To always survive throughout every single day

I would look out my window
Something there is surprising me
I would look at the lights
I would see all the sights
I would think of that life
Far away from here
Far away from here...

Even the days
Can not be ok
when you don't even care

But then in my mind
It seems you're not being kind
but you don't even care

I would look out my window
Something there is surprising me
I would look at the lights
I would see all the sights
I would think of that life
Far away from here

Far away from here.