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Remiss
06-14-2005, 10:14 PM
Hey guys let me know how this sounds:

Thrown upon the table.
Pleasure stired with pain. (My heartbeat keeps climbing).
I was there and now I'm here.
You tell me theres nothing left to fear.
(But the past keeps moving on) 2x
The glimpse of blood, a trail of tears. The same mistake I've made for years.

So scream it out.
Unleash your fear.
Speak the things I just want you to hear.
(I know im worthy, I can see it in your eyes)

So take a seat with me underneath the bridge.
Times like these that I really miss.
A nice deep breath, an honest kiss.
(It rarely occours in my life)

But I mean it now.
I need you here.
I need to make up for all of these years.
You're someone for me.
(Someone for you)
There is no one else I'd rather choose.

So open your arms.
Im coming to you.
I'm sick of what I constaintly go through.
Open mind and wide eyes.
I choose you to make my life bright.
You hold the key to lock my past.
Close the box and push it back.

And I will let go.
Just for you.
It's just something I simply have to do.

And I need.
And I need you, I do.
Your the boost of speed that can get me through.
So together we go.
We will never look back.
Talkin' straight and taking nothing back.

All I need is you to carry me through.
This dreary night we call life.
All it takes is you.
My favorite thing.
To lift me off my chest and fix everything.

-The End-

This is something I just scribbled out after one of my finals today. Didn't really plan on it sounding so emo though. But hell, it was straight foreward from my head, so I guess its just another expression of how I really felt at the moment...

So lemme know what you think bout it.

sk0rch
06-14-2005, 11:05 PM
Who are you talking about?

Remiss
06-14-2005, 11:13 PM
A close friend thats helped me through some shit back in the day.

BrainStew
06-14-2005, 11:20 PM
Give the rights to Linkin Park and you'll have a smash hit!

Stupified
06-14-2005, 11:28 PM
All I can say is... :insane:

Good job.

bono_b
06-14-2005, 11:56 PM
seems pointless to post lyrics without music. Music determines how good the lyrics are

97GAGT
06-15-2005, 01:19 AM
Those are really good, I can imagine those lyrics in a Disturbed song

Avo
06-15-2005, 01:27 AM
Well I contribute one of my lyrics.

Fools and fools
how much longer shall you go
to hurt intention with a smile
to gain what is loss to them
what pride is it to eat it up
What you gain from the loss
I will stomp you with my tongue
six feet under you shall go
death to you, a second death again

Metallic
06-15-2005, 02:11 AM
I'm glad you pointed out that It was emo.

Otherwise I would have to have done it for you. And that wouldn't have been pretty.