Emo Poem Thread (Serious Poems Only)

[BlueMind]

so I was chatting with Ray and we really opened up with each other. We shared some poems. Now I want to share with you guys.

The pain.
Let it bleed.
Cut my wrists,
Let the pain flow.
Like the river.
River of pain and darkness.

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Sitting in a dark place.
My soul in pain.
Pondering.
But wait, now there's a light.
It's just my mom,
she turned my room's light on.
I hate her.
Soul. Pain. Darkness. Cold.

Share yours.

[StinkyFinger]

ew Blue, this is gay. Make it stop. Emo poetry?! MY EYES MY EYES!

[Zooch]

we really opened up with each other.


After that did you make out for half an hour?

[Devastation]

The light,
I hate it,
Light so bright,
It makes the dark not dark,
damn Thomas and his lightbulbs,
I like the dark,
I hate everything else,
I love only me and Mr. Winkie,
I hate the light.

[1iNcHWoNDeR]

Who wrote the poems? Like which is which is what I meant. The second one is better.

[Masta Shake]

Pondering.
But wait, now there's a light.
It's just my mom,
she turned my room's light on.
I hate her.

That was fucking hialrious. Damn, I'm still laughing. Those lines singlehandedly redeemed this thread.

~MS

[frostspank]

Emo Haiku:

Damn these pants are tight.
This is the price I pay now,
My balls are hurting.

[StinkyFinger]

I think he got caught jerking off.

[1iNcHWoNDeR]

Sitting in the corner with darkness on my mind
in my heart there is nobody that is kind
I don't like light
I always fight
Why do people hate me?

Pfft....I tried.

[Zooch]

Everybody join me

What the world needs now
Is love, sweet love
It's the only thing
That there's just too little of

[18C]

No body likes me
Everyone hates me
So I'm gonna
SLIT MY WRISTS
SLIT MY WRISTS

[Devastation]

I bought some tight jeans,
from a conformist shop,
I need to take a shit,
I hate taking shits.
Cold. Pain. Darkness.

[Zooch]

I bought some tight jeans,
from a conformist shop,
I need to take a shit,
I hate taking shits.

Let's continue one another's emo poems

Shit needs to die
Its stupid
I can't wait till I die
I hide the knife under my pillow
It winks at me
I hate the knife

[XNeverBeNormalX]

I think its real cool
when i'm dressing in drag
i call it freedom of expression
you just call me a fag

Our dudes look like chicks
and our chicks look like dikes
because emo, is once step
above transvestite

[frostspank]

another Haiku:idea from the man show

I am so emo
I cry when I masturbate
I need two tissues

[JarOfFlies]

I jump out of bed
and this is what I do
I slit my wrists
slit my wrists, slit my wrists
in the morning

[MrDeliquent85]

Death ! death ! is what I plead
but my cut wrists, they do not bleed
a long dark coat, black lipstick
and my mother eyeliner is all I need
I am ready satan, for you to make my night
please take me from all this bright light.

[ehogepr]

I cry because it makes me miserable
I like pain because I deserve it
I wear girl pants
I kiss boys
My music is shitty
I'm so emo.

Yeah it sucked. but emo sucks. so the poem therefore had to suck. even if it were good, it'd still suck, because it would be "emo"


Ahhh "JarofFlies", you are my hero now, since you are an Alice in Chains fan. I bow to you, good sir. This emo fag's don't know good music, rock is slowly being castrated thanks to this flamers. We need to bring back the good ole music.

[1iNcHWoNDeR]

Emo Haiku:

Slit my fucking wrists
Do that shit untill it bleeds
Help, please make it stop.

[Devastation]

Slit my wrists and slash my face,
That's the way I masturbate!
Yay! Go Emo! Yay, yay, go Emo!

[DaDigits]

Slit my wrists and slash my face,
That's the way I masturbate!
Yay! Go Emo! Yay, yay, go Emo!
:icon_rofl HA HA HA HA that shit had me rolling on the ground. Man I love you Dev In a totaly no gay way.

[hanginloose09]

another Haiku:idea from the man show

I am so emo
I cry when I masturbate
I need two tissues


Haha :lol: . That was some funny shit.

[Jebsus]

life sucks,
i wear black clothing
to match my black heart
which is red with blood
because it's bleeding
but i don't wear red clothes because it's more black than red
my hair is black too. and it covers my eyes from stuff that isn't black
i weigh twenty three pounds
which is twenty one pounds too many
i should take a shit
to lose a few pounds
then i could be really thin
girls like that
i think i will just
sit here
all day
and not move
because muscles are bad and they make me less thin
being emo is cool
i hate people who aren't emo, they should die
or turn emo like me
emo is cool
black pain eats my face
and my mouth on my face
eats the black pain
it digests the black pain
and i regurgitate my face
back where it was before
it's clean, because i dont eat anything
eating is not good, it makes me happy
happy is bad
and it makes me very very fat
no food
ever
i die now

[sndman]

I was going to make fun of emo, but it looks like you all have that covered. Good job guys.

[CheeseMonkeys]

SLIT MY WRISTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
STAB MY HEART!!!!!!!!!!
KILL YOURSELF!!!!!!!!!
BLACKEN MY EYES!!!!!!!!
TEAR OUT YOUR SOUL!!!!

[fadetoblack5297]

Why does no one understand me?
I have to pee.
Today I got punched with clay.
And called gay.
I don't know why.
I listened to Linkin Park in my room.
My dad yelled at me.
I screamed at him in my head.
Wishing he were dead.
You just don't understand.
It is my life I cannot stand.
Tonight, I'll drink bleach.
And hope that my stomach it does reach.
First I'll slit my wrists.
Down the road,
Not across the street.
I'll lay in the bathtub,
So the water thins my blood.
And I bleed more.
Laying in a pool of filth,
Since I don't shower.
Mixed with 2 pints of blood.
Tainted by a conformist society.
John Kerry for President.
Because I'm a faggy liberal.
Listening to Simple Plan.
Wishing I were dead.
But no one would care.
Because that's what's cool.
I think.
Maybe I'll starve myself.
You know, for attention.
Cover one eye with my hair.
Hope for death.
Goodbye.
LOL.

FTB

[Viking_God]

I'm alone, the pain, it bleeds,
From my soul, it flows into darkness.
All my hate and tears are washed away.
Plunged into darkness, driven by hate and fear
of my friends discovering that I own an xbox
and I enjoy athletic activities.

[Ray]

After that did you make out for half an hour?
Nope, we made plans on how to rid the world of the three most powerful religions in the world. Jews, christians and blacks.

Then we made out.

"I want to be more like the men of mud,
so please drain me of my soul and of my blood,
Let me collapse the lung of the white mans life,
bring disaster and hate, and have a massive strife."

Raise yo gats foo.

[Schizophrenic]

Here, I wrote some emo-tastic poems just for you guys


Let the darkness cover me,
consume my soul, and gain dominance over my mind.
A tear escapes my bloodshot eyes, as I realize my body is no longer under my control.
My hair falls from my head, as my skin becomes terribly frayed and raw.
As my bones begin to crumble, I slump to the floor, and realize that I have never known true love, and never will.
My body is now a shapeless mass, and the last thoughts before my mind is closed forever are this.
I have made a fatal mistake, and spent my life looking for love, while I should have been waiting for it to come to me.
A veil of tears is now upon me, as my eyelids close, and the world that i know is extinguished from view

[thestrokes]

I'm so sick of seeing emo threads. It's wasn't funny the first time and it's sure as hell not funny now. 90% of your poems have something about slicing your wrists. How original. Get a life and quit making fun of people who are different than you.

[Devastation]

Let the darkness cover me,
consume my soul, and gain dominance over my mind.
A tear escapes my bloodshot eyes, as I realize my body is no longer under my control.
My hair falls from my head, as my skin becomes terribly frayed and raw.
As my bones begin to crumble, I slump to the floor, and realize that I have never known true love, and never will.
My body is now a shapeless mass, and the last thoughts before my mind is closed forever are this.
I have made a fatal mistake, and spent my life looking for love, while I should have been waiting for it to come to me.
A veil of tears is now upon me, as my eyelids close, and the world that i know is extinguished from view
Close my eyes and waste away,
That's how I help society!
Yay! Go Emo! Yay, yay, go Emo!
I'm so sick of seeing emo threads. It's wasn't funny the first time and it's sure as hell not funny now. 90% of your poems have something about slicing your wrists. How original. Get a life and quit making fun of people who are different than you.
Maybe our pain will go away,
If all we do is cry all day!
Yay! Go Emo! Yay, yay, go Emo!

[JordanSauce]

I call this one, broken home.
---------
My mom, only gave me
200 dollars for shopping
We had chicken for dinner
I wanted steak
Broken Home
Used and abbused.

^^^^Sums up 90% of the emo kids at my school, perfect home lives with awsome parents and bitch about it.

[Remiss]

I should do it the right way.
I know.
It would be over quick.
End my suffering.
But it is just too easy.
My hate far too great.
I will cross this street with a razor many times.
Purge me of happiness.
Just enough to make me light-headed.
No more, no less.
I know they won't miss me.
And they don't know I'm here.
So I wear my little sisters pants to show them.
My pain.
My sadness.
The blood will flow towards happier days.
Like the day my balls finally drop.
The hour I don't spend crying.
When I get laid by the living.
Until then I cry when my mom grounds me.
At least I can stay in this abyss I call my room.
In this darkness.
The one place that is safe.
Where the pain swirls.
And the blood stains.
Where I play with my G.I Joes.
And stick toothpicks down my penile.
The special kind of pain.
In this darkness, I struggle to see the light.
Then I turn the lamp on.
But it makes me scared.
So I punch myself in the face.
Because I hate my dad.
I dream of attacking him with a teaspoon.
A worthy weapon.
But he will just kick my ass anyways.
I guess I will turn completely gay.
That will show them.
Oh yes.
That will show them.

[Yumpizza]

Baby let's make a run for the border
I've got a hunger only tacos can stop
I know exactly what i'll order
Three tacos, two tostadas and a soda pop

I need to make a run for the border
If you pay i'll take off my top
Do you remember what i want to order?
Three tacos, two tostadas and a soda pop
Yeah, and don't forget the hot sauce, chulo
I cut myself

[HoudiniLives]

Confusion and feelings of being lost
I don’t know where I am, my brain is tossed
All these people, all these faces
Looking at me full of temptation
When all I want is to run away
And be with that girl who whose name I can’t say
She’s the only one who I can think of
So scared of using the forbidden word love
It has no meaning it is undefined
But it is the only one that comes to mind
Is this just High-School?
Am I just being a fool?
She says I am the best she could ever have
Do I dare go down this path?

-Ryan Monson (2005)

[TakeAdvntgeOfMe]

my life is spiralling downward i couldnt get enough money to go to the blood red romance' and 'suffocate me dry concert' it sucks because they play some of my favourite songs like 'stab my heart because i love you' and 'rip apart my soul' and ofcourse 'stabby rip stab stab' and it doesnt help that i couldnt get my hair into that flippy thing like that guy in that band could, some days...

im an emo kid nonconforming as can be youd be nonconforming too if you looked just like me, i have paint on my nails and makeup on my face, I'm almost emo enough to start shaving my legs, Cuz I feel real deep when I'm dressing in drag, I call it freedom of expression you'll just call me a fag, because our dudes look like chicks and our chicks look like dykes, because emo is one step, below transvestite.

stop my breathing and slit my throat, i must be emo
I dont jump around when I go to shows, I must be emo
I'm dark, and sensitive, with a low self esteem, the way i dress makes everyday feel like hallowe'en, I have no real problems but I like to make believe, I stole my sister's mascara now I'm grounded for a week.

sulking, and writing poetry are my hobbies, i can't get through a hawthorne heights album without sobbing, grils keep breaking up with me, It's never any fun they say they already have a pussy, they don't need another one.

stop my breathing and slit my throat, i must be emo
I dont jump around when I go to shows, I must be emo
dye in my hair and polish on my toes, i must be emo
I play guitar and write suicide notes, i must be emo

my life is just a black abyss, you know it's so dark and it's suffocating me grabbing a hold of me and tightening it's grip, tighter than my little sisters jeans, which look great on me by the way

when I get depressed I cut my wrists in every direction, hearing songs about getting dumped give me an erection, I write in a livejournal and wear thick rimmed glasses, I tell my friend I bleed black, and cry during classes,
I'm just a bad, cheap, immitation of goth, reading catcher and the rye and watch me jack off,
I wear skin tight clothes while hating my life, If I said I liked girls i'd only be half right.

i look like i'm dead and dress like a homo, i must be emo
screw xbox, i play old school nintendo, i must be emo
i like to whine and hit my parentals, i must be emo
me and my friends all look like clones, i must be emo

my parents don't get me you know, they think I'm gay jsut because they saw me kiss a guy...well a couple guys, but i mean it's the two thousands, can't 2 or 4 dudes make out with each other without being gay? I mean chicks dig that kind of thing anyways.

[Viking_God]

my life is spiralling downward i couldnt get enough money to go to the blood red romance' and 'suffocate me dry concert' it sucks because they play some of my favourite songs like 'stab my heart because i love you' and 'rip apart my soul' and ofcourse 'stabby rip stab stab' and it doesnt help that i couldnt get my hair into that flippy thing like that guy in that band could, some days...

im an emo kid nonconforming as can be youd be nonconforming too if you looked just like me, i have paint on my nails and makeup on my face, I'm almost emo enough to start shaving my legs, Cuz I feel real deep when I'm dressing in drag, I call it freedom of expression you'll just call me a fag, because our dudes look like chicks and our chicks look like dykes, because emo is one step, below transvestite.

stop my breathing and slit my throat, i must be emo
I dont jump around when I go to shows, I must be emo
I'm dark, and sensitive, with a low self esteem, the way i dress makes everyday feel like hallowe'en, I have no real problems but I like to make believe, I stole my sister's mascara now I'm grounded for a week.

sulking, and writing poetry are my hobbies, i can't get through a hawthorne heights album without sobbing, grils keep breaking up with me, It's never any fun they say they already have a pussy, they don't need another one.

stop my breathing and slit my throat, i must be emo
I dont jump around when I go to shows, I must be emo
dye in my hair and polish on my toes, i must be emo
I play guitar and write suicide notes, i must be emo

my life is just a black abyss, you know it's so dark and it's suffocating me grabbing a hold of me and tightening it's grip, tighter than my little sisters jeans, which look great on me by the way

when I get depressed I cut my wrists in every direction, hearing songs about getting dumped give me an erection, I write in a livejournal and wear thick rimmed glasses, I tell my friend I bleed black, and cry during classes,
I'm just a bad, cheap, immitation of goth, reading catcher and the rye and watch me jack off,
I wear skin tight clothes while hating my life, If I said I liked girls i'd only be half right.

i look like i'm dead and dress like a homo, i must be emo
screw xbox, i play old school nintendo, i must be emo
i like to whine and hit my parentals, i must be emo
me and my friends all look like clones, i must be emo

my parents don't get me you know, they think I'm gay jsut because they saw me kiss a guy...well a couple guys, but i mean it's the two thousands, can't 2 or 4 dudes make out with each other without being gay? I mean chicks dig that kind of thing anyways.
What's the link to that ytmnd? It would be nice to have.

[b0ondocksa1nts]

My body asleep
My mind wide awake
My soul trapped in my sleeping body

I try to live a life of meaning
I try to wake my soul
My body traps my mind

I get beat up at school
I tried to cast a spell on the football team
I think they have some kind of counter spell
I cry myself to sleep the better half of all the time.

[Master. kirby]

emo/goth faggotism is a spawn of Richard Simmons.

[TakeAdvntgeOfMe]

What's the link to that ytmnd? It would be nice to have.
http://emosong.ytmnd.com/

[Master. kirby]

http://emosong.ytmnd.com/

is that wierd al?

[Atol]

I have one. This is one of my concise and emotionally riveting poem that will reach deep into you and feel for these emo kids.

















EMO SUCKS. PLEASE DIE. KTHXBYE

[mech_rabbit]

My Heart it Aches
Like a Sodomized Inmate
My Mind Torn
Much Like Their "O" Ring

[brainkandy87]

Ode to the Virgins
Oh how sad.

[ConanTL]

My Heart it Aches
Like a Sodomized Inmate
My Mind Torn
Much Like Their "O" Ring

Ladies and Gentlemen, we have a winner :lol:

here's mine:
Eternal sadness
Mind is cold
Old my heart
See my soul
U can never win
Chris is here again
Keep him far away
Sad is my whole day

[tehpenisclown]

I'm tired of kids teasing me
Just because gay sex pleases me
At night I sleep to someone screaming
Then off I go, dreaming

Tight pants is the way to go
Look normal? Oh hell no.
I need to show everyone how desperate I am
By justifying my faggoty by saying "it's who I am"

I follow a trend I will eventually grow out of
Because I will realize how much of an idiot there of
I was back in the gay day
Oh I hope I never lose my emo way

[Biological_Dad]

Hey BlueMind, yeah so i was thinking, how about toning down the "unoriginal faggot" routine you have going on? Thanks bro.

http://forum.ebaumsworld.com/showthread.php?t=65316&highlight=Poetry

PS: Mine was funnier because i wasn't blatant about it and certain people posted their serious deep poems. Funny, LOL.

[Fish_Bone]

ANGST678910

[BlueMind]

Hey BlueMind, yeah so i was thinking, how about toning down the "unoriginal faggot" routine you have going on? Thanks bro.


Yeah? Go fuck yourself. I'm sure there have been more Emo poem threads throughout the history of the forums. My idea was sparked by chatting with Ray. Faggot.

Next time, before I start a thread, I'll send you a PM asking for your approval. That is, if you can take time off from your busy schedule at McDonalds. (I realize how demanding it is to flip the burger at the right moment.)

And speaking of unoriginal, here is one of your "original" threads.
http://forum.ebaumsworld.com/showthread.php?t=71163

"Waaa, my computers fucking up, I need help. Waaah" Real original,cockdick. I see one of those threads like everyday.

EDIT: Biofag

[.LostPelican.]

Today I slept
I slept all day
Undying day
Gripped with sadness
I bleed
Rivers of Sorrow
Help me
Find some
Help
Dont let me
Slip into
Pain
I listen to
Linkin Park

[A7hena]

I am an emo
I cry all day to ease pain
Someone notice me

[Liquid_NRG]

My 5 year-old niece owns your lame attempts at poetry.

Here is a poem she told me:

"Roses are red
Violets are blue,
You are cool,
And so am I"

[/thread]

[Master. kirby]

=That is, if you can take time off from your busy schedule at McDonalds. (I realize how demanding it is to flip the burger at the right moment.)


wow............

don't go their fag, seriously, don't go there.
btw burgers arn't fliped, they are cooked to perfection by clamshell grills so no flipping is required.

maby you should actually commit suicide, i mean seriously all you emo fags do is threaten to kill your selves, complain about your life no matter how good/bad it really is yet your to much of a pussy to actually go through it.

try getting a job or dressing like normal people, unless your gay you should realise girls don't like emo/goth fags, they already have pussies, they don't need another one.

[StinkyFinger]

wow............

don't go their fag, seriously, don't go there.
btw burgers arn't fliped, they are cooked to perfection by clamshell grills so no flipping is required.

maby you should actually commit suicide, i mean seriously all you emo fags do is threaten to kill your selves, complain about your life no matter how good/bad it really is yet your to much of a pussy to actually go through it.

try getting a job or dressing like normal people, unless your gay you should realise girls don't like emo/goth fags, they already have pussies, they don't need another one.

That was pretty funny. So damn true. "Oh, look at me, boo who who, I'm gonna cut my wrists, I'll do it... really!...ok, maybe I will!"

[JarOfFlies]

Dress normal?

Define normal.

[brainkandy87]

I'm dumb, she's a lesbian,
I thought I had found the one.

We were good as married in my mind,
but married in my mind's no good.

[Pollo]

Here I am. Lying.
In state and mind. I lie.
Truth knows no name of I.
For I lie.
To die or lie?
I lyke pie.

[jakhavok]

Dress normal?

Define normal.

no nut-hugger pants/pink shirts/girl jackets

cut ALL of your hair to where it blends together and not have a rat tail out of the side of your head

plain non-pink/non-tight shirt with non-tight/-non-marked on jeans


emo = gay

emo's cant dance, cant fight, cant sing, cant write, and dont want to live...guess that leaves only one option huh?

[Master. kirby]

no nut-hugger pants/pink shirts/girl jackets

cut ALL of your hair to where it blends together and not have a rat tail out of the side of your head

plain non-pink/non-tight shirt with non-tight/-non-marked on jeans


emo = gay

emo's cant dance, cant fight, cant sing, cant write, and dont want to live...guess that leaves only one option huh?

not really, since they can't actually kill themselves anyways.

[jakhavok]

aye, it leaves the option, but their too pussy to take it

[poopchow]

As I walk across the highway I dont cross the street.
The red lane lines grow larger.
I become weak and cold.
I grow faint and limp.
Im a faggot.

[b0ondocksa1nts]

Hey BlueMind, yeah so i was thinking, how about toning down the "unoriginal faggot" routine you have going on? Thanks bro.

http://forum.ebaumsworld.com/showthread.php?t=65316&highlight=Poetry

PS: Mine was funnier because i wasn't blatant about it and certain people posted their serious deep poems. Funny, LOL.

Fuck dude you had me dead to rights with that thread, here was my serious submission:

http://forum.ebaumsworld.com/showpost.php?p=931291&postcount=3

God, I've always been sweet.

I respect artists and poets and such, but you people are really not it. Just because it sounds dark and mysterious and no one understand it, doesn't make it good. Nevertheless, here's my submission;

The dark edges of the valley have never seemed more slippery
The impossibilties of escape never seem to go away
escapement the dark universe, triumphant over nothing
if there was something to hate I would hate.
but there is nothing.
Hate.
Nothing.
Hate.
Something?
Nope, nothing.
Hate!

[eadgbe]

i wanted to die and kill myself because i am sad
so very sad...
so i took a knife and tried to cut my wrists open
but it wasn't a knife...
it was a ROCK LOBSTER

ROCK LOBSTER
ROCK LOBSTER
*ROCK LOBSTER *


dooo ddooo doood oooo doood do o dodoooooooooooooooo

[jakhavok]

The dark edges of the valley have never seemed more slippery
The impossibilties of escape never seem to go away
escapement the dark universe, triumphant over nothing
if there was something to hate I would hate.
but there is nothing.
Hate.
Nothing.
Hate.
Something?
Nope, nothing.
Hate!

how cliche...isnt it awesome how there is a certain style for people claiming emo to write some words down an call it a poem, wtf is up with the string of one-word lines? here i got a good poem for ya

The path of the righteous man is beset
on all sides by the iniquities of the selfish and the tyranny of evil men.
Blessed is he who, in the name of charity and good will,
shepherds the weak through the valley of darkness,
for he is truly his brother’s keeper and the finder of lost children.
And I will strike down upon thee with great vengeance and furious anger those who attempt to poison and destroy my brothers.
And you will know my name is the Lord
when I lay my vengeance upon thee.

now that's a poem, now you are dead, cuz that's just some cold shit to say to someone before you kill em, but somethin got me thinkin...(you know the rest)

SUCK ON THAT EMO-SHIT

[BaxterII]

i am emo
full of emotion
i cry in corners
and jack off with lotion
my mommy always says
its not the size of the pee pee
its the way you work it
and the motion of the ocean
i cut my wrists
and never shower
that'll show the man
all of my power
i dance like a retard
a stupid retard fag
i'm going to end my life
with my head in a plastic bag
:wtf: :insane: :confused:

[b0ondocksa1nts]

SUCK ON THAT EMO-SHIT

It looks like your poem might have been plagiarized, loz3r. Go be a poser somewhere else conformist freak.

[jakhavok]

sorry for bein a conformist and not being my own person, you're right, i should be like all the emo's, yeah their different, what's the style again? i see people dressing like it all the time, yeah, i should be different, then me and you can be different together!! we can shop at hot topic and wear skintight jeans so everyone can see my nuts, and and and we can wear shoes made of cloth but could you write on them first? i would hate to be a conformist and be like what nobody else is doing and do what all the rest of my kind is doing, also, is it ok if i grow my hair out with one long tail coming out the side of my head? that's cool and very original, i see it all the time, youre right conformity sucks!

*edit*
no shit it's plagerized, dumass, no one but the Tarantino could write something as beautiful as that

[Bajee]

Blue I was always under the impression that you weren't gay.

[BlueMind]

Blue I was always under the impression that you weren't gay.
You were wrong.

Put your throbbing phallus between my supple lips so I may caress it with a gentle, rolling motion of my tounge. I will not cease until your snowy avalanche fills my mouth and slowly drips from the side of my lips as I look up and my hazel eyes meet yours.

[jakhavok]

*disturbed*